Monday, August 12, 2013

A WRITING PROMPT, REALY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

"I wonder what is in Mrs.Clayton's closet?  I think I will take a look inside.  It's just school supplies!  Wait, there is something shiny!"  CRUNCH!  CRUNCH!  Gasp!  "It's...It's...SNOW!"  CRUNCH!  CRUNCH!  Gasp!  "I'm not moving!"  What is that strange figure coming towards me?Who's there?  Hi my name is Snickerdoodle Marvin Snickerdoodle.  Hello Mavin, I'm Kierstyn .  Were am I?  You are in the wreched land of Evil Randle.  Why is it wreched?  It was Jollyland. 

Then one day Queen Clayton disappered.  Ever since then Evil Randle had taken over and made it wreched.  How about I show you to my house. Sure!  When we got there Suzzy Snickerdoodle invited us in.  We were eating dinner when Evil Randle's wolves dug into their house.  The Snickerdoodles were prepared! One wolf got Suzzy's leg!  Luckly Marvin was prepared, he had wolf repelent.  We raced to the saff zone.  When we got down there I asked, why did Queen Clayton disapear?  No one knows.  Suzzy said.  Are the wolves gone?  I asked.  "I'll check."  said Marvin.  When Marvin got up there,there was a scream!  Marvin looked down then he screamed, "GOT YA!!!"  Then we  started walking away from the Snickerdoodles home.  After a long time the wolves found us again, so Marvin and Suzzy stayed behind.  Then I went ahead.  Then I came to a opening,with a mansion.  I knocked on the door and there was a scream!  Then out came my best friends Emma and Mikayla!  Then Emma yanked me inside.  They told me that Queen Clayton was locked up in Evil Randle's over sized abiss.  So we set out early and caught up with Marvin and Suzzy. Soon we came to a canyon , then Mikayla said "lets jump!"  Emma said "The water is about an inch deep."  Then I pointed to a bridge and said , "look over there , it's a old bridge!"So...when we got over there the bridge had only one board!  By surprise Marvin brought his tool  box with a long board inside. Then Marvin nailed it to our side of the canyon.  So we walked across...but Suzzy wouldn't come!  Marvin asked "Why aren't you coming?"  "I can't because I'm a mhifohon."  "What?' Mikayla said confused."Is that a language Marvin?"  I asked puzzled.  He shook his head no.  "I'M A TRATOR!  The wolves found us again because I told them!  Wait...the wolves haven't found us again." I said.  Did I mention the wolves will be... here... NOW!  Howl!  Run Suzzy!  Oh no. " Just run," Marvin said to us."Look out!" Emma screamed.  "Well hello Suzzy." said Evil Randle.  Oh noooooooooo!  Where where are we Suzzy?  I think where are in Evil Randle's giant bird cage. Why in the word would he need a giant bird cage?  I have no idea.  "Hey whats that glow over there," Mikayla asked Emma?  I don't know, Kierstyn?  Nope, Suzzy?  We might be able to find out,  how. if you havn't noticed we're in a GIANT BIRD CAGE!  Suzzy your backpack!  She has a backpack on!  Yeah, every dawrf has a strange thing on them.  Oh.  Whats inside?  A ladder, jumprope,rope,the book The Lion, the Witch, the Wardrobe... STOP! What. What did you say? The Lion the Witch and the Ward... NO before that. Oh, just a rope.  Great, we can use that to pull that thing forward!  Okay.    CREAK, CREAK, CREAK!  Who is pulling me?  A soft sweet voice said.  It is I Suzzy, Marvin, Mikayla, Emma, and Kierstyn.  Who are you?  Mikayla questioned.  I am Queen Clay....  TON!  Marvin inturupted.  Do you know how to get out of here?  Emma asked?  There is two ways, you could fly or cross a bridge.  Suzzy.  On it.  Let's climb across the ladder.  We made it out of his castle!  Not so fast, your not out of the woods yet.  Randle it doesn't  have to be like this. Oh,  yes it does Clayton.  This ends here...  KIERSTYN GET UP IT'S TIME FOR SCHOOL!        




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